No Need For A Lie

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    No Need For A Lie

    My head finds this pillow,
    not soft
    but mahogany cold...
    iridescent...
    alive with thoughts of yesterday
    with no remorse for the weary.

    Outside lies the days mist.
    Filled with dandelion-ash,
    drifting to the window's edge
    to sneak a peek at my entourage...
    the dance of memories I take
    night after endless night

    The moon sings a lullaby
    but the words are remnants...
    only taunting
    my already trailing sanity.


    One would think the BLUE
    would fade away some evening...
    leave me at peace.
    At the very least empty...
    void of yesteryear's wishes.

    Only...

    I find my mind is too astute
    and my soul too wistful
    to believe such a lie
    as forgetfulness.

     


     

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    wheelsal commented on No Need For A Lie

    06-09-2009

    Can't wait to read more of your poetry. Interesting use of imagery (dandelion-ash). Keep up the good work
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    thoughtsaflame

    06/11/2009

    Thank you soo much for taking time to read me. I am touched that you enjoyed reading me. :o)

    bellagal commented on No Need For A Lie

    06-06-2009

    that was great. i could feel your emotion in the flow and i go with legos12, i like the 2nd stanza best. very good. keep it up! :)
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    Legos12 commented on No Need For A Lie

    06-05-2009

    Ooo, nice language. I LOVE the second stanza. And the way you capitalized blue, obviously brings a thought to mind.
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    Cosmos commented on No Need For A Lie

    06-03-2009

    WOW..., its like a breath of fresh air. That was an incredibly well written and beautiful poem. It was filled with emotion and portrayed very well in your articulation. I wish I had half the talent that you have. I look forward to reading more. =)
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    shewheat46 commented on No Need For A Lie

    06-03-2009

    WOW THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL! I REALLY REALLY LIKED THIS! Very very good poem. Thanks for sharing now let me share with you. Please come visit my profile and read some of my poems and remember to leave a comment. I like comments just as much as the next poet
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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