No Ones Sees

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    No Ones Sees

     How can it be that no one sees
    me as I am and not who I am?
    How can it be that no one knows
    that I am lost and trying to be found
    How can it be that no one sees
    how hurt inside I am
    I cry myself to sleep @ night
    everyone is here but no one sees
    the tears that fall
    I am strong but am I that strong really??
    I try to hide my fear
    now im afraid that it all shows.
    How can it be that no one sees
    sees that more is in store
    then meets the eye
    wicked is here and no one sees
    maybe we are just blinde and
    we all pretend to be ablivious
    to the ovious.
    How is it that no one sees
    whats right in front of them
    till its gone.
    Please open youe eyes and sees
    what is around.
    How is it that no one sees??

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    rebecca14 commented on No Ones Sees

    11-22-2011

    i kno how you feel i live in a big family and its like no one understands
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    sbbuchanan

    01/20/2012

    same :/

    Morris commented on No Ones Sees

    10-12-2011

    Most people see what they want you to be not what you are thenm they are upset because you don't meet their expectations.
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    sbbuchanan

    01/20/2012

    i know :/

    Tarlton009 commented on No Ones Sees

    10-09-2011

    very good, and I can relate to the way you are feeling, I have felt the same way as if I were invisible to the world, but even when the rest of the world does not see and does not seem to care, you are not alone. I don't know your faith and I am not trying to preach or push you to believe something that you don't from my personal experiences with feeling invisible I know that times can get rocky, and it is times like that when I am glade I have a solid rock to stand on, that is the Solid rock, which is of course my savior Jesus, for he promised to never leave us nor forsake us as long as we believe and are willing to call out to him. please forgive me if my words offend you in anyway, my only intention is to try to bring hope and maybe some comfort to you. great work though, keep up the good work.
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    sbbuchanan

    11/20/2011

    thank you(:

    sbbuchanan

    11/20/2011

    sorry commented on the wrong thing

    wiskeygirl5090

    06/20/2012

    Your words do not offend me at all the one thing my mom always taught me was to have faith and as that faith grows you will start to believe and yes i do believe with all of my soul. My parents use to drive ambulance for the area i am from and over the years i have seen things that make me know that God is up there watching over us and guiding us thank you for your comment.

    Worthless commented on No Ones Sees

    10-01-2011

    yup... invisible we are to human contact and care...
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    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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