not sleeping

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not sleeping

Im laying here not sleeping in my bed

Im writing this down to get you outa my head

It wont be long before I get to sleep

Maybe ill drown cuz my dreams are so deep

 

Theres a pain way down deep inside my chest

It always keeps me from feeling my best

It starts out there only to spread to the rest of my person

I never get better my condition only seems to worsen

My prayers are getting shorter if they come at all

I still hate that I let myself fall.

My lack of sleep its not your fault

No, your just to blame for my hearts assault

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cmlestrade commented on not sleeping

10-19-2009

I wish these poems were dated because this sounds like your former work , Good rhythm and meter. Theme is a little puzzling.

jam4muzic commented on not sleeping

08-05-2009

Hm..I liked the rhyming thaty's for sure. Sorry, but the grammatical mistakes bugged the hell out of me. Anyway, for me. I thought it was about how someone is troubling you. I liked that theme. Liked it a lot.

Clayton3

08/11/2009

Sorry about the grammar issues. I was being lazy, i am with all of the things i write. I don't take it to serious because it is just something i do to get things off my mind. Thanks for the comment.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Clayton3’s Poems (23)

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Old Photograph 0
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Late Nights 1
Linger 1
My Own Affliction 2
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Makes No Sense 1
Greatest Obsession 0
Angel Of Death 1
Falling Confetti 0
Fairytale 1
Half Asleep 1
When you take it all away 1
truth about deceit 1
I'll be right there 1
before i found you 2
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what she did to me 1
what i see looking at you 1
not sleeping 2
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im sick 1