Numb

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  • Anguish

    Numb

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    Can’t feel my fingers

    Can’t feel my toes

    Numb

    Can’t feel my heart beating

    Can you hear me breathing?

    Numb

    The heart stops the blood congeals

    Numb

    From the inside out

    And from the outside in

    Numb

    Feeling hallow feeling ill

    Can you hear me howl?

    Numb

    Morning for my frozen body

    Morning for my depleted soul

    Numb

    No Torment can make me feel

    Because I am

    Numb

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    Bobbie876 commented on Numb

    08-20-2010

    numb...emotionally , physically, literally, spiritually..what a way to capture it: you've turned numb inside out ...beautifully ( incidentally did you mean mourning instead of morning?)

    BrittKun

    08/21/2010

    opps lol

    Stryx commented on Numb

    12-27-2009

    Another good ezpression, but hallow os not hollow dear one.

    Stryx

    12/27/2009

    Yeah, nice - I can't spell either. Sorry [expression]

    BrittKun

    03/03/2010

    hahah : ) no prob.

    ginga commented on Numb

    12-20-2009

    Brittkun, Numb is a word that conjures so many thoughts. You have used this word in its most inclusive way, touched on all its nuances and crafted a fine poem that emotes several emotions and images. ginga

    BrittKun

    12/20/2009

    Thanks I am touched thanks my poetry could do that!!!

    Platti commented on Numb

    12-04-2009

    I really like this poem, it has a sense of dread and defeat in it, I may be sick, but I really like this type of poetry! Very good write :3

    BrittKun

    12/08/2009

    Thanks!!!!

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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