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    In light there is darkness

    In darkness there is night

    In night dreams become nightmares

    In nightmares death dwells

    In death there is peace

    In peace there is honesty

    In honesty there is love

    In love there is lust

    In lust there is evil

    In evil there is pain

    In pain there is sorrow

    In sorrow there is reality

    In reality there is darkness

    In darkness there is corruption

    In corruption there is government

    In government there is room to change

    In change there is Obama

    In Obama there is hope

    In hope there is survival

    In survival there is the USA.

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    stever commented on Obama

    11-29-2009

    this is good..now you read goverment cheez one of my veiws

    ARU commented on Obama

    11-27-2009

    Reminds me of my poem "The Poem" I enjoy your style...

    Tony5880 commented on Obama

    10-07-2009

    Raven I like this poem it was factual and i like the words..Tony5880

    1990lh commented on Obama

    10-06-2009

    u know what I LOVE THAT i thought the styling was great and i love how yu used repetition in this excellent job and i so agree with the message great raven. yay :0)

    SEVEN commented on Obama

    10-06-2009

    Being a youngon that was unable to vote...This is a very good piece...Like T-Moble this belongs in my Fav file...Good job... Kudos

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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