Oceans

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    Oceans

    You feel the ocean waves crash along your feet
    the smell of the sea salt relaxes you
    the cool breeze push against you body
    Little baby steps towards the warm ocean waters

    You've stepped towards the beautiful wonders of the oceans sea's
    You see shrimps, sea stars, squids, sponges, and sharks.

    You surround the beauties of the world
    God blessed us for giving us the most magnificent world.

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    Lolee commented on Oceans

    07-26-2009

    This is what I have been looking for. Something that has nothing to do with love. I like this alot! and I think it is a 10.

    Dreamer123

    07/26/2009

    thanks alot :D God Bless

    TREVON commented on Oceans

    07-09-2009

    This poem is wonderful, it very discriptive, and warm Trevon

    Dreamer123

    07/10/2009

    Thank you very much. Thank you for your comment. god bless

    cynthiakehl commented on Oceans

    07-02-2009

    very lovely poem,...sets mood, feelings and imagery of walking in the ocean, with the oddities that make it beautiful. great write.

    Dreamer123

    07/05/2009

    Thank you. :) Thank you very much. I inspire myself sometimes with my surroundings.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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