Ode to the Belly Dancing Girl

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    • Christina13
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    Ode to the Belly Dancing Girl

    The zills chime,

    As the beat of the drums

    Cause her hips to

    Move up and down

    Back and forth

    In a sexual cadence

     

    Her beauty unmatched

    Her hair long and raven black

    Stops just before the swell of the back

    Her heart pure

    Her dancing

    Hypnotic

     

    Her hips tell

    A thousand tales:

    Tales of love,

    Tales of heartbreak,

    Tales of passion,

    Tales of rage,

    Tales of lust,

    Tales of forbidden fruit tasted at last

     

    Her hip bells

    Jingle and jangle magically

    As she spends

    Seemingly above

    The floor

    The men in the crowd

    Hypnotized  

     

    Her arms reach up towards the heavens

    As they snake there

    Way up it seems as if

    She can almost touch

    The feet of God

     

    Her veil twirls

    As it drapes over her

    Thin and cat like frame

     

    The music speaks to her heart

    Just as God speaks the pure

    The music fills her

    Causing her hips to vibrate

    In a beautiful,

    But seizure like fashion

    This is the way she speaks to the crowd

    How free she is

    To say what

    Most leave unspoken

     

    They may not know her name,

    But she's the one they dream about

    She’s the one they come to see

    She’s the one they all cheer for

    She’s the belly dancer girl

    And for two hours a night

    Her heart is an open book for you to read

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    Qualin commented on Ode to the Belly Dancing Girl

    03-22-2012

    in one of your poems there is no GOD in another a belly dancer is touching his toes...humm?

    Artie commented on Ode to the Belly Dancing Girl

    02-09-2010

    This is very good- I pictured her dancing through the entire read - 10 from me

    Christina13

    02/18/2010

    Thanx dude! I'm so glad for all lthe feed back I get from all of you guys. It's alot more heplful other than "It's GOOD!". I'm glad you like it.

    Dancer022597 commented on Ode to the Belly Dancing Girl

    01-02-2010

    Im a bellydancer and i loved this poem so much! U got all the dance words right and it was so sweet and cute! Great job and keep it up! -Dancer

    Christina13

    02/18/2010

    Thanx! I'm taking lessons myself, I've always look at belly dancers as amaizingly beautiful. I'm thrilled that you liked it.

    WordSlinger commented on Ode to the Belly Dancing Girl

    12-28-2009

    Lil Sis, this is fantastic, it had the wiggle in it, nice, Bravo" loved it ty WS

    Christina13

    12/28/2009

    Again thax for the nice comment, I was thinking about sendig this one in to a magazine, I just hope the feel the way I do.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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