Oh my lovely moon

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The moon , the one i love

Oh my lovely moon

I spend many a night staring into the heavens,
Searching for something to ease the pains I feel.
I cry out to the moon for salvation,
I beg her to take me away.
Let me leave this world behind.
Here there is no way to treat the wounds upon my soul,
Here my hands are stained black with blood no water can wash away.
A thousand lifetimes I feel I have cried for your return,
Please do not forget me for another thousand.
Take me away,
Name the price and I shall pay it.
My soul is yours already,
My heart beats only for you my lovely moon,
My mind has been lost since i first saw you,
Please leave me in this hell no longer.
Mend these broken wings and let me join you,
And together we shall rule the night,
Leaving the world and her burdens far behind us.
Forsaken and bound in sin I await your salvation,
Oh my lovely moon,
Save me and forget me no longer.

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WordSlinger commented on Oh my lovely moon

08-18-2010

Holy Troly Troys, are you on fire here, look this poem is completely KICK ASS, what are you doing to us, writing killer poems and leaving, ok I see how it is, lol, love it Troy, ty WS

Troy

08/18/2010

i aint left i am just sorta slow . to much typing makes the digets hurt. =) i will try to add some of my older stuff as i can as well

Rhymer commented on Oh my lovely moon

08-18-2010

Excellent.........read, the longing reaches out to the reader. 10

Troy

08/18/2010

thank you i was worried this one would not be as good as some of my others=)

ShadowStealer commented on Oh my lovely moon

08-18-2010

Wonderful!!!! I never have words that really describe poems well, but I really enjoyed this! ShadowStealer

Troy

08/18/2010

i am glad you like it shadow, and i often have that problem my self=)

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Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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