ohh my crazy fate

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    ohh my crazy fate

     im waiting for some rescures
    got nothin to do got a thousands dimes on my fate
    is it far or is it late
    should i continues for this fate
    my head is spinning out of control
    andit burns the bottoms pits of my soul
    am i truly a butterfly
    will i ever touch the sky
    will i ever see the birds of heaven fly
    all the things i have done
    all this blessings for my son
    no you know what we have seen
    has it all been a bad dream?

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    peacepoet commented on ohh my crazy fate

    06-23-2009

    thats beautiful i can feel the despair but also the forgotten hope, a truly interesting piece got me thinking
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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