one day

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    one day

    one day I'll see you,
    and you will know,
    how much I loved you,
    because it will show.
    i was a baby,you left behind,
    you had said,
    yes, shes mine.
    we had to leave,
    and you were ill,
    I was so young
    I did'nt know,
    I prayed to Jesus,
    for many years,
    please bring my Daddy
    back to me,
    now I am older,
    and understand more,
    the right thing was done.
    but for who?

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    rose081900 commented on one day

    02-16-2009

    short, sweet and simple along with some passion:).

    kenparme commented on one day

    11-23-2008

    good poem-makes me feel for you

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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