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    • ShanneN
    • A working class hero is something to be.

    ouch

    The tears, they want to pour out like rain.

    The screams, they want to sound like im in pain.

    Because I am.

    Physical, no not this type.

    Mental, its this kind that’s ripe.

    And it hurts so bad.

    I don’t even know what is the cause.

    So I take a minute, I pause.

    Looking on life, and how it is.

    The people here are my reason to live.

    But some people mean more to me,

    Than a bone to a dog or a leaf to a tree.

    I wonder why I cry for no reason.

    Its not even allergy season.

    So there must be a cause to this painful feeling.

    I wish I could find it so I could start healing.

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    Ninjaboy commented on ouch

    10-29-2010

    i like it... thats all i can say.... 10 here.......... -----------Ninjaboy---------

    lastyl commented on ouch

    07-17-2010

    very nicely written, it's horrible when you don't why you're feeling a certain way. Without knowing the problem it can be very difficult to find the solution. Excellent Job!!!

    ianraiseland commented on ouch

    06-17-2010

    i like the rhyme scheme. its vague, but rings familiar. something many can identify with. i give it a 10!

    Nibula5 commented on ouch

    05-03-2010

    Awesome poem everything makes sense. I know how you feel. Seriously your poem is AWESOME your a very good poet.

    charlesdarling commented on ouch

    12-19-2009

    I just loved the analogies that you used. It paints the picture that you wanted to very well. This way things sounded not harsh but filled with feeling. It was great to read. Thanks!

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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