OutRage...

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written 3.16.2010 ”... are you the Reeper?...”, Know, keeper of the reef rather, ”... a school of fish, taught me to see…”, 1000 days in the Milky Way, Koi you are, coy, the realest deal by far, Buddha with a tale, sun kissed by a star, Hidden in the Mangroves of a Mango jar, ”... is this better butter honey?...”, ”... it’s your play.mate…”. ”... check the coral…” they said. ...this hurts us. Sometimes, there are just no words... and this is why I 'listen'. 4.4.2010 Great Barrier Reef rammed by Chinese coal ship “Australian officials are attempting to minimize the effect that oil leaking from the vessel might have on the world’s largest coral reef….The 700-plus-foot vessel leaked oil into the Great Barrier Reef Marine Park near Great Keppel Island off the east coast of Queensland state. (Australian Maritime Safety Authority / April 4, 2010)"

OutRage...

The outer edge of my mind is brooding,
Steaming, bubbling in ways not soothing.
Outraged at the mistakes unfolding
Out of range yet an anger growing
And better to have you listen….
‘Cause, the message I mention is potent.
Delivered to those in the notion
The outer limits of Source I reckon
Are poised to deploy the great Oceans,
If and if we don’t hear…
There’s a Care we forgot to endear
Watched from the outer most sphere
Burning hot with their spots in my ear.
So heed and make speed to attention…
We owe it the Clean of a loving detail
We’re held on the Means that we prevail
Bread to make right yet wrote that we fail
Spreading fear over years as a ‘no reveal’
OutrageUs! they staged us and hid the Real.
So let me flow within the stream of a wolf
and let me show what the dreams can expose
“Four those… there came four more”
“Exposure through the open doors”
“Make it right” They said, 
at the close of a Night and a wake…
“Make it write” They said,
to begin Second Flight before the break
They said… entourage... clean it up!
The outer edge of my mind is brooding,
Steaming, bubbling in ways not soothing.
Outraged at the mistakes unfolding
Out of range yet an anger growing
And better to have you listen….
‘Cause, the message I mention is potent.
Delivered to those in the notion
The outer limits of Source I reckon
Are poised to deploy the great Oceans,
If and if we don’t hear…
There’s a Care we forgot to endear
Watched from the outer most sphere
Burning hot with their spots in my ear.
So heed and make speed to attention…
We owe it the Clean of a loving detail
We’re held on the Means that we prevail
Bread to make right yet wrote that we fail
Spreading fear over years as a ‘no reveal’
OutrageUs! they staged us and hid the Real.
So let me flow within the stream of a wolf
and let me show what the dreams can expose
“Four those… there came four more”
“Exposure through the open doors”
“Make it right” They said, 
at the close of a Night and a wake…
“Make it write” They said,
to begin Second Flight before the break
They said… entourage... clean it up!

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If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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