Outstanding Strength

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Outstanding Strength

Be outstanding because beneath the skin is a body and beneath the body is a soul. The soul cannot be reached, unless touched by someone special. No one wants to be with a love who is just like everyone else. You do not pay attention to those people. You want to be able to say I would die for him in heartbeats moments. You shall not give up because that is what people are expecting and if you don't give up then that is what makes you strong. Don't fall apart when people expect you to the most. Stay Strong!

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cmlestrade commented on Outstanding Strength

01-03-2010

This was very good prose and very profound advice. I live the line " The soul cannot be reached, unless touched by someone special. that is what made me love this piece.

writingislove

01/22/2010

Thank you! That line, I actually could not think of what to say, it took me hours to think of, and then my father walked in and just said the word soul, and that popped right onto the paper.

NLott commented on Outstanding Strength

10-15-2009

I can really feel what you're sayin' here.....I wish i was this fluent....

writingislove

10/15/2009

I dont always know how to be strong and when people expect me to be strong and I cant, I feel weak. But when I dont know what to do, I try and find the best in the situation.

Hampton commented on Outstanding Strength

10-01-2009

This is very good advice delivered in a conversational style that is more prose than poetry but very nice all the same

writingislove

10/02/2009

Thasnk ypu!

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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