Paczkryu

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    This is a Senryu.  I have recently learned that these are Haikus that are not about nature, but focus on emotion instead.

    Paczkryu

    A Tasty Paczki
    Strong Aroma Overcomes
    Happiness Endures

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    clips401 commented on Paczkryu

    01-19-2010

    Beautiful!
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    papapaczki

    01/20/2010

    Thanks for reading!

    clips401 commented on Paczkryu

    11-05-2009

    Good work.. Woot woot! woof woof! I can smell it now!
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    papapaczki

    11/05/2009

    The smell of a fresh Paczki is like a human mouse trap.

    rougepriest commented on Paczkryu

    10-22-2009

    the title is as clever as the senryu, nice, I will have to try my hand at this
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    papapaczki

    10/22/2009

    Thank you! They are fun to try and put together. Short, simple, but makes you think.

    Troubador commented on Paczkryu

    08-26-2009

    Good job, a senryu is also reserved for nature. I believe this is haiku.
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    papapaczki

    08/26/2009

    I originally called it Paiczku, a Haiku, but started talking to people and researching the difference. I found this on wikipedia: Senryū is a poem that is written in a similar form and emphasizes irony, satire, humor, and human foibles rather than seasons; it may or may not contain a kigo and kireji. So I went with it.

    wheelsal commented on Paczkryu

    07-24-2009

    Thanks for sharing your Haiku Paczki. I smell it in South Haven. Sally
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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