Pain

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    Pain

    I watch him suffer, I watch him cry. I look for answers and ask God why? The pain is strong it runs so deep, he cant sleep, he can't eat.If our God is really true, then why all this pain must he go threw. In my mind I curse like a women who's gone mad ,but it doesn't help, the pain is still to bad. So to God who is so high and above I beg for you to show some mercy show some love.
    Take him to where the joy bell rings, let him listen to the angel sing. Please take him away from  all his pain to a place where all you can whisper his name.

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    Unique28 commented on Pain

    07-14-2009

    This is very touching and emotionally . i can feel the pain you express in the poem . 10:)

    babyfire04 commented on Pain

    06-10-2009

    Very strong and emotional. I have an uncle dying from cancer right now and it hits a cord. You hate seeing someone you love in that much pain.

    CraigStyle commented on Pain

    06-05-2009

    I love this, it ran so deep for me it reminds me of how I felt when my Mom was dying from cancer. I sat by her bed watching her suffer calling the nurse to increase the morphine drip. Asking God why? She has passed now and still the pain continues...(sigh)

    GucciGurl

    07/22/2009

    I lost my mother to cancer 2.I sat by her bed and watch her die. U never really get over it only get thru it. It has been 20 years since she passed but in September the pain always comes back.The day she died chanced my whole life just as it will when my bro passes.I will never b the same

    Bobcatmoon commented on Pain

    06-01-2009

    very deep in emotional imagery..makes you feel you are there..buildig to a sadness awaiting for peace from the pain

    DirtyLilSecret commented on Pain

    06-01-2009

    Very nice poem. This is very deep and i can feel the undercurrent of pain. You are good at expressing yourself anf making the readers see what you see.. Congrats

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