Painter Eleven

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Dear artist,
Lots of nice things are done in the name of graphic art when the computer is as turned on as yourself.

Painter Eleven



controlled opacity
brushes bristle
varients abound
a wash of intent
and a dry sweep
leaves a trail of delight

clickety swish
a dash is dotted
pat it gently
"there you go
-smokin!"
the dog snizzles
up to my loose hand

go away!
(drink more juice)
I do
rub the girl a bit
what the hay!

not too much!
must listen to
moderation ...
could turn to mud

brushes bristle
dichotomy of values
one of paper
one RGB
one must dry
the other is
click and save.
Two hundred or so
and yer good to go.

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Madelynn commented on Painter Eleven

08-28-2009

When I read your work-I cant keep from smiling! Your stuff is SO-life.There is this way that you turn a phrase that just keeps us fans right here waiting to see whats next! Also-gotta say..WOW,on the art scene here!-Those drawings are incredible.I love.love the first one.I also love the eyes of the boy!-You are an insanely talented guy!-so glad Im back to experience true talents.-10,on the poem-10,on the art!

Madelynn

08/28/2009

Oh-you dont want it rated!-whoops!well..shhh-it'll be our lil' secret,LOL.Still worth a ten-smile.

NevillePark

08/29/2009

You're a sweety! Howzabout a hug.

Madelynn

08/29/2009

LOL-Big Super Duper Giant-till that little noise squeaks out!-HUGZ!!smile.

Vincent commented on Painter Eleven

08-20-2009

A blank page filled with thoughts to capture ones imagination, the reader must think, the reader is challenged, pip pip, good job ole boy. well done.

NevillePark

08/21/2009

heh heh heh! What a riot! ~thank you.

ginga commented on Painter Eleven

08-17-2009

Neville, A very clever artistic demonstration lying latent in here. A refreshing and wondrous ditty full of instructions, wit and whimsy. I loved it! ginga

NevillePark

08/21/2009

Hi! Nice to see you agin. I must admit I've never used Painter 11 but it's price is dropping radically So I'm imagining what it's like to work with it once I get the app. I've used CorelDraw for years and only dabbled with Photo Shop and Adobe Illustrator.When I talk about my dog I also only imagine. They don't allow dogs in the apartment.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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