Passions' Dark Embrace

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    a fun tryst on the dark side

    Passions' Dark Embrace

     

     

     I awoke feeling cold and unafraid

    My thoughts were different and deviously made

    I would shrink at the sun and come alive with the moon

    Thoughts of a purer lover making me swoon

     

    Feeling a glimpse of a silvery passer as I roamed the dark wood

    Unusually delicious, there you stood

    With your mind you requested a ride through the clouds

    I answered with my eyes and fell under your shroud

     

    Dark splendor was felt in every way

    My senses were opened and went astray

    As my heart burst open and bled my sighs

    Assembled, we joined between my thighs

     

    Thrashing and dashing among the heavens

    Until unsatiable lust was completely ridden

    Was it only a trance or was it for real

    The journey we took was a romp we’d steal

     

    Again you would approach

    Taking me on a magical coach

    For it is our only chance to chase

    Swept along passions’ dark embrace

     

    -M. Jacobs

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    Madelynn commented on Passions' Dark Embrace

    11-27-2009

    Incredible visual experience! I love to writing that is just-great writing!-There is so many beautifully crafted lyrics here, I almost get lost in the moment of readingLOL-love this!
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    danmartyjake1

    12/02/2009

    I don't often write about dark subjects. I was in a zone at the time. Thanks for your thoughts.

    BadBadBear commented on Passions' Dark Embrace

    11-20-2009

    A nicely written work you've created from the dark side. Dream, dream on.
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    danmartyjake1

    11/22/2009

    thanks BBBear. I sometimes go darkly, but not that often

    NevillePark commented on Passions' Dark Embrace

    10-23-2009

    It could be werewolf sex, or something vampirish perhaps but certainly not zombyish. It's been written that some women fantasize about being raped. I wonder if the darkness is delicious when the dark conqueror is himself conquered by the moment and, is it a matter of being in control or out of it I wonder? Interesting subject matter.
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    danmartyjake1

    11/22/2009

    Neville, this is a great ponderance I too have had. Maybe it is why I wrote the poem. I am not sure where it came from. I have heard about rape fantasies. I think perhaps that it's not so much rape as it is being seduced and ravaged in some sort of pleasurable delightment.

    Grito commented on Passions' Dark Embrace

    10-19-2009

    Permit the heavens to reign from on high, permit the sun to burn the sky, please let the lascivious earth flower consume me with her sigh.
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    danmartyjake1

    10/19/2009

    Nice. I like your response. Thanks.

    ginga commented on Passions' Dark Embrace

    10-18-2009

    jake, I like the alluring quality to this poem. It's underlying sentiment is quite evil but the charismatic draw of the erotic passion turns the woman into a seductress. This is a great theme and lends to the eerie,haunting, and phantom days October. ginga
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    danmartyjake1

    10/19/2009

    Thanks, it's interesting that you saw a woman seductress. I reread and realized it could go either way. I appreciate your opening my eyes to this.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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