Passions' Dark Embrace

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a fun tryst on the dark side

Passions' Dark Embrace

 

 

 I awoke feeling cold and unafraid

My thoughts were different and deviously made

I would shrink at the sun and come alive with the moon

Thoughts of a purer lover making me swoon

 

Feeling a glimpse of a silvery passer as I roamed the dark wood

Unusually delicious, there you stood

With your mind you requested a ride through the clouds

I answered with my eyes and fell under your shroud

 

Dark splendor was felt in every way

My senses were opened and went astray

As my heart burst open and bled my sighs

Assembled, we joined between my thighs

 

Thrashing and dashing among the heavens

Until unsatiable lust was completely ridden

Was it only a trance or was it for real

The journey we took was a romp we’d steal

 

Again you would approach

Taking me on a magical coach

For it is our only chance to chase

Swept along passions’ dark embrace

 

-M. Jacobs

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Madelynn commented on Passions' Dark Embrace

11-27-2009

Incredible visual experience! I love to writing that is just-great writing!-There is so many beautifully crafted lyrics here, I almost get lost in the moment of readingLOL-love this!

danmartyjake1

12/02/2009

I don't often write about dark subjects. I was in a zone at the time. Thanks for your thoughts.

BadBadBear commented on Passions' Dark Embrace

11-20-2009

A nicely written work you've created from the dark side. Dream, dream on.

danmartyjake1

11/22/2009

thanks BBBear. I sometimes go darkly, but not that often

NevillePark commented on Passions' Dark Embrace

10-23-2009

It could be werewolf sex, or something vampirish perhaps but certainly not zombyish. It's been written that some women fantasize about being raped. I wonder if the darkness is delicious when the dark conqueror is himself conquered by the moment and, is it a matter of being in control or out of it I wonder? Interesting subject matter.

danmartyjake1

11/22/2009

Neville, this is a great ponderance I too have had. Maybe it is why I wrote the poem. I am not sure where it came from. I have heard about rape fantasies. I think perhaps that it's not so much rape as it is being seduced and ravaged in some sort of pleasurable delightment.

Grito commented on Passions' Dark Embrace

10-19-2009

Permit the heavens to reign from on high, permit the sun to burn the sky, please let the lascivious earth flower consume me with her sigh.

danmartyjake1

10/19/2009

Nice. I like your response. Thanks.

ginga commented on Passions' Dark Embrace

10-18-2009

jake, I like the alluring quality to this poem. It's underlying sentiment is quite evil but the charismatic draw of the erotic passion turns the woman into a seductress. This is a great theme and lends to the eerie,haunting, and phantom days October. ginga

danmartyjake1

10/19/2009

Thanks, it's interesting that you saw a woman seductress. I reread and realized it could go either way. I appreciate your opening my eyes to this.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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