Performing on Stage

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    • kpeery09
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    This poem is based on a friend of mine when she had to perform for solo and ensamble contest for high school.

    Performing on Stage

    I'm on stage, the feeling of uneasiness comes to my stomach.
    I get nervous, not able to sing on stage.
    As I wait for my name to be said to come on the stage I take a deep breath.
    I tell myself to stay calm as I perform.
    I heard my name, I come to the stage to perform.
    As I sing I see the audience dazzled by my voice.
    They stared at me like I had a voice of an angel that was delivered from Heaven.
    As I finished the song the audience raised out of there seats for a standing ovation.

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    stever commented on Performing on Stage

    12-13-2009

    do you realy sing...most of my poems/songs..have been used in bands i have been in...so cool...

    stever

    12/13/2009

    oh srry see it was someone else

    SuperChick76 commented on Performing on Stage

    12-12-2009

    Very nice. I loved some of the words you used. I did notice that you tended to repeat yourself. Maybe look into finding new ways of saying the same thing, so that the reader doesn't feel... redundant. Beautifully written. I enjoyed it greatly. Good job.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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