PLAY WITH ME

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    PLAY WITH ME

    I play to win
    I play to show...
    Fighting against time.
    revives my world,
    all covered
    with magic love.
    his docile face
    knotted to the past
    do not fall in love that fast.
    God says... they already smile,
    the pain s gone,
    it won't come no more....
    Dawn keeps this light on,
    unforgetable moments
    are strong like stones.
    Open your magic window,
    give him light,
    give him heat,
    give him the trust
    cover with death and dust.

    AIXA

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    laydbak1 commented on PLAY WITH ME

    08-11-2009

    I enjoyed the see-saw displacement of emotions and passions between the car and the woman... An very interesting and creative piece, and you made it work... I didn't like the alt-possibility of a violent ending you dropped there at the end, but that's a reality too... Well done....

    AIXA

    08/12/2009

    Sometimes mistery of happy and sad endings is fun.

    HarverTomsson commented on PLAY WITH ME

    08-07-2009

    Oh, the confusion between car lust and lady lust. I'm trying to remember what my Dad warned me about, was it hot cars and fast women, or fast cars and hot women? Steamy. steamy, and just a bit threatening at the end. Just so much better to get adrenaline pumping. You know guys well, don't you?

    AIXA

    08/08/2009

    I have that white Shelby GT and is fast and hot, so do I.

    AIXA

    08/08/2009

    Also I know men likes cars and woman together, got it?

    HarverTomsson

    08/09/2009

    Ingrid, Ingrid, my Yamaha FJR1300 may or may not beat your GT on the top end. But I dare say the ride at 140 mph is waaaay more memorable. But I do luv that White GT. I'll be checking for it at the stoplights on the strip Saturday night.

    Grito commented on PLAY WITH ME

    08-07-2009

    Wuaaaaoooouuu! Late, late, late la sangre en mi corazon,

    Grito

    08/21/2009

    Son las ruedas, mi flor querida, que nos guian en el aladar a nuestras esquinas de piel y dulzura.

    AIXA

    08/08/2009

    You made my heart beat fast too.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    AIXA’s Poems (52)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    MY CAPTAIN KIDD 0
    MAGIA 0
    MAGICAL 0
    Si muero mañana, deberías saber... 0
    Cierra tus Ojos... 0
    CLOSE YOUR EYES... 3
    If I will die tomorrow you should know. 1
    A FREE SPIRIT CALLED "AIXA" 1
    TO GRITO 1
    Loving in Silence 1
    TO THE ETERNAL "GRITO" 5
    You, my Bright Star! 2
    WHAT YOU MEAN TO ME 8
    MAGIC BUTTERFLIES 3
    A POEM 1
    You the Firefly... 1
    Alphabetical Thoughts 2
    THE APACHE PROMISE 7
    THE CURSE 4
    POETRY WITH YOU 4
    ONE LAST BREATH... 2
    PONCE DE LEON 4
    NENEIS!!! 3
    TO "GRITO" THE POET! 6
    A NEW LOVE 9
    A MOURNING STAR... 2
    ERES 2
    AMANDOTE 3
    TRUE LOVE 4
    YOUR BODY PARTS 3
    'ANGELICA" 1
    THE FUCHSIA ROSE 2
    THAT NIGHT… 1
    LOVE SPELL 8
    PLAY WITH ME 4
    SAVE ME 2
    SI DECIDES AMARME 3
    IF YOU LOVE ME 11
    TRUE SMILE 5
    TRUE SMILE END 2
    A FEATHER IN THE WIND 21
    CELESTIAL BOND 12
    MY OTHER HALF 3
    I love my Dad 7
    INNOCENT CHILD 18
    Lost a Loved One 13
    I asked God for you 14
    Being inside of you 20
    Close to you 9
    Envejecere a tu lado (Spanish) 7
    Seeing through your soul 10
    I will age by YOUR SIDE 19