"Polar Bear evolution"

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Polar Bears. I fear them like no other creature on earth! But they have as much of a right to be here as I. They are starving and becoming extinct, it is a shame. We are the caretakers, a responsibility given us in leiu of our superior intelligence over the animals. We can do something, this was just an idea. Write on...

"Polar Bear evolution"


It's born, its mother sleeps
tiny, soft and sparkling white
they grow rapidly to full might.
My farm girl curiosity wonders
for a gorge or a mate
would  a polar bear migrate?

Huge appetites go along
 with that advertisement and song,
huge appetites unsatisfied
and the pain of hunger leads to suicide.
He is in the wheel of life,
he lives in our nation,
I say lets teach him about migration!

Show him again
 where the salmon spawn for him now.
Give him a place to go and a trail and a how.
And if like the rest,
 he goes before his nap but once a year
to feast with a family or two.
I say he will grow fat again like you and i
 and the whales do.

It is a ritual as old as time
to gather to fatten for winter.
To tolerate during a time of plenty
an argument or a splinter.

I say give them a season or two
they will adjust slowly, at first just a few.
Then they will bring along one or two
as mating seasons will do.
 
Then,  when he is fit and healthy
against the Grisly, he'll be wealthy.
Then you will once again see
fat baby polar bears and fierce papa's to be
on our nightly TV.




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dancinghawk commented on "Polar Bear evolution"

02-13-2010

beautiful meditation on the beauty and majesty of a species in transition, indeed ... a beautiful vision, and a beautiful share :) ty for posting! -dh

Tempestlady

02/18/2010

Just wish they would do something about their predicament. They are starving and getting thrashed by the grisly's and I hate it. Thanks for reading.....

Madelynn commented on "Polar Bear evolution"

01-27-2010

I am going to share swomething special with you; When I was little I had an Uncle. He took after the Italian side of my family-and you know how unique Italian relatives can be! Well, I was very, very,white blonde(after the Irish side in my family) Well, my uncle nicknamed me PolarBear. I called him Uncle BobbyBear, it was 'our special thing'. He even brought me to Brookfield zoo, just to see the polar bears..Loosing him was really tuff-he died young, at 50yrs old.-Anyhoot, this piece brought a tear of remembrance to my eye!-and you have written it beautifully.Thank you for sharing this.-Maddi

Tempestlady

01/27/2010

You must have been a very beautiful child to deserve such a nickname. Glad I brought back some happy memories. Thanks for reading. Write on.....

Oblaidon commented on "Polar Bear evolution"

01-21-2010

Yes, they are awsome animals. Sharks are also misunderstood.

Tempestlady

01/28/2010

I read somewhere that sharks start hunting before they are even born! They eat their siblings inside their mother that way only the strongest survive to be born...Wow,,,,Thanks for reading, your comments are always appreciated...Write on....

Oblaidon

01/28/2010

They have a bad wrap for killing people. They kill far less people than people imagine. When we go into their domain, like going to the North pole, we take on certain risks. We certainly have more power to make them extinct than they have at making us extinct. I give the polar bears and sharks a wide path :)

SavVySam commented on "Polar Bear evolution"

01-04-2010

Very nicely done, sharing images and insights engendering support for an incredible species!

bloomingsun commented on "Polar Bear evolution"

01-04-2010

I like this, it would be so great if we can find a solution to the looming threat of extinction of these majestic animals. Great write!

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