Project3:Insignificant [Sonnet?]

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  • hannahxP
  • the greatest litterary work of my life, will be the last i ever wright.

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i tryed to wright a sonnet in shakesberian styl not like word style but you know 14 lines iambic pentamiter quartet quartet quartet couplet ; that kinda stuf but it didnt turn out right i dont think i got all right but oh well i got something out of it=]

Project3:Insignificant [Sonnet?]

 

Sometimes I can fake it,

Smile and say, “I’m okay.”

But sometimes I can’t make it

I need help to make it through the day.

I want you to be proud of me,

Look at what your babies done.

But it’s not always easy,

Some days it feels like the world’s won.

As long as you can hear me,

I will stand my ground.

Take this world by storm,

Listen for the sound,

Stand outside the norm’.

We will take this world by storm.

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