" Try Me"(Babe)

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" Try Me"(Babe)

I know your heart was badly broken and it's on the mend  Yes, I'm gonna win your trust and be your very.very bestn friend  I'll never leave your love dangling  and your emotions on the deep bitter end    Try me, Babe, Try me, Babe I know how awful  your pain can be to have a   shatterd broken Dream. an optical illusion of love about passionate things.I know just what you feel, Try me, Babe, Try me Babe                  Copyright@G.W. aka Wildpendigus 2009

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FreeBird02 commented on " Try Me"(Babe)

03-28-2010

Very note worthy feelings of passion! Keep up the good work. FreeBird 02

Mareann commented on " Try Me"(Babe)

03-16-2010

Wonderful writing... very enjoyable poem, This gets a 10 in my book, thanks for sharing! Mary

Paradice21 commented on " Try Me"(Babe)

11-30-2009

This is A Nice piece... Love the message within it!

wildpendigus

12/16/2009

Ithink so too, I'll bet you are too! WP

krisann commented on " Try Me"(Babe)

10-18-2009

THIS IS A GREAT POEM....EXPRESS WHAT U FEEL..TOTALLY AWSOME......:o)

wildpendigus

10/18/2009

Thanks!WP

Melissa commented on " Try Me"(Babe)

10-18-2009

i love it! it would make an amazing song, that's for sure

wildpendigus

10/18/2009

Thank you and it is a song!WP

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

wildpendigus’s Poems (5)

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" Those Long Summer Nights" 18
" Try Me"(Babe) 63