"A GIFT FROM GOD"

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    "A GIFT FROM GOD"

    We met in a park, that was full of shade trees,
    I was reading a book, enjoying the breeze.
    When a voice walked up and said"may i join please?"
    i looked up to see who was talking to me,when i looked into his eyes,,,,this just couldn't be!

    we then become friends,and met every day,
    along with"gut" feelings,that i just couldn't say!
    We clicked from the start, got closer each day.

    Had long talks with "GOD" on my mind playing tricks,
    Had long sleepless nights,watch the clock as it ticks!

    Why is this confusing me?! Why should i care?
    He's all that i've dream of,,,,,Why"s that "feeling" still there?

    I was "drawn" to my hope chest, for "memories" i've shared,
    "Maybe something's"connections" to my past that i spared.

    When i come to the bottom,they're were pictures i kept,

    This cant be happening!i dropped to my knees!
    That night was the first time i screamed "God" please!!!!

    "this new man  if my life, once "my love from before!!!
    "He got killed in a car wreck!
    "ripped" my heart out, and "more!!

    But how can this be?!
    "all the "time" that we have spent!
    "in a form of an angel, he was sent there for me!!!!!
    "this is the birthday i'll never forget.
    for this was the wedding that we had, buit didn;t get!!


    the stars are out, and the moon is full,
    romantically perfect, it so beautifdul!

    i'm not felt this feeling for many a year,

    i'm lighting the candles, for i feel that;s he's near


                       carolyn love

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    kdarcy commented on "A GIFT FROM GOD"

    12-06-2009

    Love is a powerful force both real and imagined. A nice soft write of a love story never ended, the best kind. Be well, k

    boomboom56 commented on "A GIFT FROM GOD"

    09-17-2009

    Heavy stuff. Love how you connected the past with the now. It is true that some days we long for good things gone. This writing brings it to the front.

    soulwriter commented on "A GIFT FROM GOD"

    09-07-2009

    I didn't see the connection of the past until the very end, which was in a sense a new beginning... the miracles of God are often indescribable and unimaginable - thank you for sharing your gift!

    tierra7 commented on "A GIFT FROM GOD"

    07-26-2009

    Carol, this was totally incredible!! ! so heart tuggin'...such an inspirin' poem...such a gifted poetess you are...You Shine!!! .keep penning...T-7

    carol1952

    07/27/2009

    thx tierra, thats the nicest comment i think i've ever got! gives me a good feeling to know someone likes my poetry,,,,,and feels to the words with feeling!,carol

    Hampton commented on "A GIFT FROM GOD"

    07-26-2009

    A lovestory written with casual grace and deep feeling. Well done.

    carol1952

    07/26/2009

    hey hampton! nice of yu to drop by, lol j/k thx hun for yur kind words yuv always have to say,carol

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

    carol1952’s Poems (56)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    "MY VISIT TO HEAVEN" 1
    "havent a clue" 0
    THIS BROKEN DOWN ANGEL 1
    "TO BE OR NOT TO BE" 2
    "COMPANION" 2
    "MY LIFE IN A "NUT" CELL" 2
    "FARM LIFE" 2
    "COMPUTERS" 3
    "WALLS" 2
    "RAINBOWS" 3
    "CHANGES" 2
    "WILL YOU BE READY?" 1
    "THE CONNECTION" 2
    "THE INTRODUCTION" 1
    "THE BASICS OF LIFE" 1
    "JUST A LITTLE TALK WITH JESUS" 1
    "MISSING YOU" 1
    "CINNAMON" 2
    "JUST A MATTER OF TIME" 5
    "A GIFT FROM GOD" 8
    "I BELIEVE"!!! 6
    "CAN'T MISS A FRIEND, YOU NEVER HAD!" 5
    "USA" 3
    "BELIEVE IT OR NOT" 4
    "AS THE WORLD TURNS" 4
    "FANTASY FROM THE "PASSED" 1
    "QUIET PLACE" 2
    "SOMETHING FISHY" 4
    "LESSONS LEARNED, TABLES TURNED!" 6
    "THE JOURNAL" 4
    "BORROWED TIME" 5
    "YOUR'RE NOT ALONE" 4
    "JUST IN TIME" 1
    "LIFE" 1
    "TIM" 4
    "INSANE?" 4
    "A WORKING SOUL'S BOOST" 4
    "A TRUE BLESSING" 1
    "WITHDRAWN, WITH NO HOPE" 1
    "GOING HOME" 0
    "GONNA PLAY,,,,GOTTA PAY!" 3
    "THE TREE" 4
    "WEATHER OR NOT"! 1
    "MY JOURNEY WITH GOD" 1
    "MARRIAGE GONE WILD!" 2
    "CHRONIC PLEA" 0
    "NOT ALWAYS A "BOX OF "CHOCOLATES!" 1
    "THE POWER OF PRAYER" 4
    "ADDICTION" 2
    "CONFUSED, AND DOWNHEARTED" 2
    "ACCEPTANCE" 4
    "TWO DOGS DISCUSSING POLITICS" 4
    "DOG NAMED BLUE" 1
    "POET AND DIDN'T KNOW IT" 2
    "9-11-01" 3
    "A CRY FOR HELP" 3