"All About Ira"

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    "All About Ira"

    In my darkest hour,
    He has always been there.
    Reaching out his hand,
    Letting me know he cares.
    Always more than willing,
    To lend a listening ear,
    Giving me his all,
    Saying what I need to hear.
    Ira was right on time,
    As a friend should be.
    He never exchanged a word,
    But only continued to comfort me.
    Even if someday
    Ira and I must part,
    I pray he'll keep me hidden,
    Deep within his heart.
    In my immediate future,
    It's Ira's picture I see
    And nothing can hold us back,
    Not if it's truly meant to be!!

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    kdavidscott1 commented on "All About Ira"

    06-15-2009

    Pure genius - I love the flow - rhyme and reason - rhyming is a thing of beauty to me as well - especially when it maintains the concepts / meaning of the title to express the subject in such a joyful manner as this - some people just like to use words to describe a feeling, paint a picture, and etc. that don't rhyme - I love it when it rhyme - flow - and express the vividness which is what you done here - continue to flow - how you know - if that is your style so be it ...it doesn't make you lesser of a poet to me... KD

    humbleandeliver commented on "All About Ira"

    04-27-2009

    powerfull

    Sopradiction commented on "All About Ira"

    04-22-2009

    nice poem--sincere, dedicated, pure devotion--good style too: keep it up

    abbadejuju commented on "All About Ira"

    04-14-2009

    peacefully done

    NyquanaLaura commented on "All About Ira"

    03-04-2009

    cool inspirational piece i'm adding it to my favorites. Kudos, Nyia

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