"Aquafire"

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    Poem Commentary

    Don your poetry berets, lol! Lost continents were the inspiration for this one. It's in the vein of For Summer Isles, though different enough I think, and longer! And, of course, enjoy!

    Straft Dir ~

    "Aquafire"


    The first horizon is a grassy edge
    The daring blades so absent of a care
    It's a mile down, the loneliest ledge
    And never a fence, none required there.

    The next horizon is the sacred sea
    The realm of tempests, the realm of realms
    The saline being of futures to be
    And there the islands are the crystal helms.

    The third horizon is the atmosphere
    The sea winds come and go in strange delay
    There the stars reside and resonate clear
    Dreams begin there and remember today.

    The next horizon is the ancient sun
    A cosmic fire for the cold planets
    The heart of the system, the heart of one
    As the solar skies maintain their exits.

    The first horizon is a galaxy
    There the dimensions collide and divide
    There the destinies are the ecstasy
    For as long as timelessness will abide.




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    Seongwoo commented on "Aquafire"

    01-10-2011

    I used to describe the moon, as exit of the night. I enjoyed your 5 horizon. Great Work, Stardrift.
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    Stardrift

    01/10/2011

    Thank you, Gwoo, lol! That is an interesting similarity with the exit element then. I'll read more of your ruminations. Heartlight!

    HarverTomsson commented on "Aquafire"

    01-07-2011

    A mind expansion prod, getting us to consider beyond the unspoken "lost" horizon, for there never is a last one. Harv
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    Stardrift

    01/07/2011

    Thank you very much, Tomsson. I'm ok with infinite new ones - as long as it isn't due to amnesia! : ) Spirit bless.

    MindNumbing commented on "Aquafire"

    01-07-2011

    Beautiful! The imagery here is wonderful, stardrift... I enjoyed this tremendously :)
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    Stardrift

    01/07/2011

    Hey thanks, MindNumbing! Yeah, this one really is one of my favorites. Ty, and God bless!

    Tempy commented on "Aquafire"

    03-14-2010

    The first horizon is a galaxy There the dimensions collide and divide There the destinies are the ecstasy For as long as timelessness will abide. ... you've done it again. another great beautiful poem with imagery that forms before you're eye lids while reading your poems
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    danmartyjake1 commented on "Aquafire"

    12-31-2009

    This prose takes me away to another place. It's sort of otherworldly, if you know what I mean. Ethereal in many aspects. I love that ittransports me when I read it. Great Writing!
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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