"When The Funk Hit The Fans"

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"When The Funk Hit The Fans"

It was a beautiful day in spring, just right for an outdoor party fling      The Band had set up on stage, rumor has it tey were the hotttest rage  They played a funky groove, from a wild errotic tune                            just then is when the Funk Hit The Fans, They started jammin and rockin  in the stands, so when the Funk Hit The Fans, They were screaming, singing and clapping with the Band                                    It was like a hypnotic tranz took over the the crowd,like a snow covered cloud, not a moment they were bored, they had never such excitement before,They played a funky groove from a wild errotic tune                   just then is when the Funk Hit The Fans, They started jammin and rockin in the stands, so when the Funk Hit The Fans, They were screaming,singing and clapping with the Band                                     the band really rocked the house, and left the crowd so aroused           they can't forget that day, hoping for so many more to come their way   Golden Pagoda Productions  and Greg Wong@ copyright 2008

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FranzJ commented on "When The Funk Hit The Fans"

12-04-2009

you must like music and/or play - music is my favorite too - nice groove

wildpendigus

12/07/2009

Thanks for your kind comments

lindabrito commented on "When The Funk Hit The Fans"

10-01-2009

You must be a great song writer, because I feel the music every time I read one of your poems. Linda

wildpendigus

10/02/2009

Thank you, but I have wrote for a lot of famous singers! WP

RebeccaKempf33 commented on "When The Funk Hit The Fans"

09-25-2009

This is like being at one of those live poetry meetings in a club....snaps fingers lmao!

wildpendigus

09/27/2009

Thank you for your nice kind comments!WP

ListninEar commented on "When The Funk Hit The Fans"

09-15-2009

Oh, if you haven't already (which I find hard to beleive) you are definetly gonna get discovered! This stuff needs to be made famous. Your writing just seems to connect us all!

wildpendigus

09/16/2009

Thanks I hope so!WP

danmartyjake1 commented on "When The Funk Hit The Fans"

09-13-2009

I like the sound in this. I hear the music when I read it.

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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