rage

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    rage

    boiling, bubbling, like a cauldron of molten sulfer
    it builds.
    nearing the top of this hell's boiling pot, so much power
    it wields.
    The hate of a century,
    it can convey.
    the strength of ten men, yet one man's orders,
    it will NOT obey.
    Red is seen around the eyes, this rage will never,
    be disguised.
    If anyone ever hurts my girls.
    I...Will...Kill...Them.

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    jademelissa74 commented on rage

    06-17-2009

    You manage to arrange a powerful piece with the use of a few phrases. You are a talented man. I have truly enjoyed reading this poem. Thank you much for sharing your work. It is appreciated!

    Charmin commented on rage

    04-23-2009

    Hi Dangemanjr, I really enjoyed reading your poem. I thought it was very powerful and look forward to reading your other poems.

    DARKPOET113 commented on rage

    04-22-2009

    A LEVEL OF PROTECTION NECESSARY IN THIS TIME OF ENDGAMES, I RELATE TI THIS. VERY NICE INDEED.

    jadienblu commented on rage

    03-24-2009

    i feel that ..i have girls too!

    sk commented on rage

    03-21-2009

    Feel the same way about my kids and Granddaughter

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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