RAINFOREST

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  • consciousmsgr
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RAINFOREST

Craaaack, groooaan, swooooosh, kaboom!

Deep in the forest a tree hit the ground.

No one was around. Did it make a sound?

 

The perfect conundrum for ancient philosophers

Their time and space so different from ours

 

Almost forgotten, the birds, bees and flowers

Sadly, we worship steel and cement towers

 

Much more technology!

Far less ecology!

 

Craaaack, groooaan, swooooosh, kaboom!

Deep in the forest a tree hit the ground.

Was anyone there when it was downed?

 

Brilliantly back dropped by a sea of green

Plethora of colors like any unseen

 

Up in the lush canopy akin to the ocean

Trillions of leaves, incessant motion

 

Way down below, a mighty howl

The strong and hungry are on the prowl

 

Craaaack, groooaan, swooooosh, kaboom!

Deep in the forest a tree hit the ground.

Does anyone care if it made a sound?


Perfectly camouflaged, jaguar salivates

Sitting on a log, hiker contemplates

 

Humbled by the awesome dimension

Not even the slightest apprehension

 

Giving in to a protective notion

Carefully applying repellant lotion

 

Craaaack, groooaan, swooooosh, kaboom!

Somewhere nearby a tree hit the ground.

What if it hadn’t made a sound?

 

Too close for comfort, hiker knows

Could’ve been dinner, but different wind blows

 

Philosopher at heart, he looks for meaning

This chance encounter, oh so revealing

 

One life spared, dinner denied

What if falling trees are multiplied?

 

Craaaack, groooaan, swooooosh, kaboom!

With increasing frequency trees hit the ground.

Are we capable of understanding this sound?

 

Bulldozers clearing, fires burning

Loggers working, axes churning

 

Habitats shrinking, bellies crying

Cities growing, forests dying

 

Terribly alarming!

Global warming!

 

Craaaack, groooaan, swooooosh, kaboom!

Around the globe shrinking forests abound.

Our collective silence continues to astound!

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mamasan commented on RAINFOREST

11-07-2009

May I humbly state that I did hear the silent treet that fell and its cries and groand reached all the way to the metropolis I live in. But this is the first time a writer defined and put things in perspective when he introduced the hiker and the line about empty bellies feeling pangs of hunger just because man didn't listen. You see when man has his putanella full he is oblivious to his fellow man's fate..........

ginga commented on RAINFOREST

09-14-2009

conscious, I read this in the P.O.E.T.S. forum and was truly impressed with the eco message behind this, not to mention your repeating the stanza and using the onomatopoeias for drama and clarity. The introduction of the hiker and jaguar reallyn brought this to life and the changing last line in your repaeated stanza I found quite stylish! ginga

consciousmsgr

09/14/2009

Hey Ginga, many thanks for the feedback. It is truly appreciated. I approach the writing of a great deal of my poems with the mindset that I am writing a short story, only in verse. That is why I introduce various characters like the hiker and the jaguar into what might otherwise be purely a narrative about a particular topic. It is also why some of my pieces almost come to life. Obviously I am more successful with that technique in some pieces than in others. It happened to work well in this one. Thanks again and much respect.

Kdaddy commented on RAINFOREST

09-13-2009

An good poem to raise awareness. I loved the word usage and imagery you executed. Good Job.

consciousmsgr

09/13/2009

Thank you Kdaddy. I appreciate the feedback. Raising awareness is what it's all about. I'm happy to make my small contribution. Would you join me and encourage others to help raise awareness?

Hypothicus commented on RAINFOREST

09-12-2009

I'm at a loss for words right now...You nailed it. It's a shame we live in a world that doesn't put this kind of poetry at the front of popular publications. I must say you are already becoming an inspiration for me.

consciousmsgr

09/13/2009

Thank you very much for the feedback. I am happy I have inspired you and hope I can continue to do so, especially to inspire you to help raise awareness. Thanks again.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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STILLNESS 0
SWEETNESS 1
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