Raining Love

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    For DestinedQueen writer of it's first line....

    Raining Love

     Your love is like humid summer rain falling from the clear blue sky.
    A miracle you say, maybe who understands these things.
    We met when my world was blue now all I feel like doing is loving you.
    My heart explains that your love is much like the rain.
    Pouring down from heaven to ease my pain.

    Someday soon we will see the stars reflecting in our eyes.
    Then everyone will know I'm your one and only till I die.
    Most of the world will search for for this elusive prey.
    And never find what makes both of us shine.
    They spend all their lives praying for a love like mine.

    Your love is like humid summer rain binding my soul to yours till my last day.
    Welcome this day will be, for I'll know that through all the sway I really lived with you by my side.
    And loved you all the way every summer filled with humid rain.......

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    photochick commented on Raining Love

    08-20-2009

    o love is pouring out of this one once again you take a line and turn it into such pure breath taken art wonderful poem lucky
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    lucky62

    08/21/2009

    photo honey if I were a single man I would marry you......lol....

    DestinedQueen commented on Raining Love

    08-15-2009

    Don't quite know how you can just crank one out that easily with just a first line! Amazing talent you have my friend...and to think you almost reduced the self proclaimed QUEEN to tears!...nice write lucky! DQ
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    lucky62

    08/15/2009

    It just cause of your begining my dear

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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