Raw Power

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    Raw Power

    Raw Power

    Within you feel your heart rejoice
    Freedom of the an unworldly kind
    A feeling of passion once on low
    The fire burns hot beneath your soul

    Bubbling beneath a surface of gray
    Your face turns pink from the light of day
    A touch of sunlight caresses your skin
    That unbelievable sensation of a difficult win 

    Release the power
    Feel the beat
    Absorb the vibrations under your feet

    Be one with yourself
    Forgive your wrongs
    For happiness is what your heart longs

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    Viper89 commented on Raw Power

    03-12-2011

    I like the way the first stanza didn't rhyme but the last three did! Very Unique and Very Good!!!
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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