Release

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    From the perspective of a prisoner just released..... Sorry I was bored.

    Release

     I sigh in happiness,
    Released from my cell.
    No more stale air
    Full of prisoner's cries.
    A breeze tickles my cheek
    Saying hello.
    I dig my toes into
    Mother Earth
    Savoring the warmth of the sun
    Thinking back to my
    Damp, cold cell.
    Green grass beneath my feet
    Blue sky keeping watch over me.
    I feel peaceful
    My pleas for release answered.
    I have a second chance
    And I'm not going to throw it away.

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    BlackButterfly1 commented on Release

    01-27-2011

    You are certainly able to capture a moment and translate it into words. Wow..... I'm enjoying your work so far.
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    utah commented on Release

    12-16-2010

    i cant wait to read the rest of you work, i cant belive your so youg, i was there too at 14 and so was my dad i wounder if your words came from your life or imagination either way you know your poems are gifts to those that read your words always belive in your self and keep sharing your greatness with the world
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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