Remember Me

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  • BigDaddyCash
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Remember me I’m the one who loves you, forever through the annals of time.

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Remember Me

Remember me when you write your amazing poetry,

I’m the one who lives for its beauty and chemistry.

There is a light shining down through the darkest sky.

The beacon sent to guide me to that garden on high.

Remember me when the warmest breeze kisses your ear,

With your words of mercy and your kind words that cheer.

For where the bird flies and the bell tolls my shadow lies.

It will fall upon you and you’ll see me through divine eyes.

Remember me I’m the mystery that dwells in your heart,

The compelling thoughts and fertile seed of thy poetic art.

For when the robin sings and the little white cloud cries,

The music and the teardrops capture the hope it implies.

Remember me I’m the cool water that refreshes your soul,

The moisture of baptismal waters giving youth to behold.

For convictions are subtle in the whirlpool of tranquility.

Letting peace and happiness enter the world of reality.

Remember me I’m the foundation of all of humanity,

The body and soul of human nature existing in vanity.

For my heart joins the very fibers of true existence.

Letting you bask in the glory of your own persistence.

Remember me I’m the one who loves you.


Truly, forever, through the annals of time.

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ss29angel commented on Remember Me

11-23-2009

your poems evoke emotion in the souls of man. they affect people. poetry infects our hearts and your virus is one i would never cure. keep up the inspiration, and listen for the muses call.

BigDaddyCash

11/23/2009

I'm glad my virus is clean and offers inspiration some can really be dirty and devastating.

SavVySam commented on Remember Me

11-21-2009

Lovely images in your sweeping words of beauty! Great line.. "convictions are subtle in the whirlpool of tranquility." wish it were mine! Fine work my friend!

BigDaddyCash

11/23/2009

Thank you bunny rabbit, coming from you (with your amazing talent) no compliment could ever be better.

dahlusion commented on Remember Me

11-19-2009

I like the simpleness of your benign rhymes, the simpleness of your mind's lean foliage.

BigDaddyCash

11/19/2009

I write with compassion using everyday language that readers of all ages can comprehend. I use parables and poetic persuasion in the simplest way I know. My stories unlike my poems are filled with subliminal messages disguised for unawareness. It all boils down to this; I love people and I love to write.

BigDaddyCash

11/19/2009

Seeing that I am from the school of haed knocks I don't know what you mean by my minds lean foilage. Does that mean my my is lacking in cluster,

BigDaddyCash

11/19/2009

I wish I could remove my last reply; it just goes to prove that my mind is lean foliage. Oh yes, I learn by the mistakes I make. BDC

Gracey commented on Remember Me

11-12-2009

beauiful, "For my heart joins the very fibers of true existence." besttt line :)

BigDaddyCash

11/12/2009

Thanks

rmlee commented on Remember Me

11-10-2009

i've read a few of your pomes,and I really like them.

BigDaddyCash

11/12/2009

Thanks

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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