Results of a Torn Mind

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    Results of a Torn Mind

    Here lays my heart
     My heart is in two
    Two halves make a whole
     the hole in my soul
    My soul has been pierced
     pierced by your hands
    Your hands are so cold
     cold enough to haunt
    Haunt my every move

    Move my mind around
    Around the world
    Can you see me now?
    Leave me alone
    I will not go home
    Leave me be
    You horrible thing
    Bumps in the night
    Night brighten up my life
    The fever is gone
    Now I lay cold....dead...alone

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    countryboy1988 commented on Results of a Torn Mind

    12-01-2012

    that was a very interesting piece and very well written it has the object for you to sit back and actually understand what is written good job
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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