River

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    River
    Oh river's surging pulse
    you are an art
    of nature's outburst,
    How you show God's wisdom
    for having things to run in freedom
    You are relentlessly flowing
    while beings within you are thriving
    You are worth the praise
    more than any man-made sacraments
    for your flow is nourishing
    and your rhythm
    is far more revitalizing
    than the sermon's sting

    The moon above your wife
    is teased by your sensual murmurs at night
    And intoxicated by like the sight
    of streaming liquors-
    spitting ecstatic moans
    every time you made love with her
    inside the wilderness of the forest
    in the stillness of the night.

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    DeepEclipse commented on River

    02-25-2010

    I always like the visual of a bright moon shining upon the surface of water on a dark night. Such a thing to remember the beauty of nature in a time overwhemling with technology. The poem even reveals a passion to it, proving to me that it was not a mishap, but created by an intelligent being. Well written.
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    Rhymer commented on River

    12-17-2009

    I truly enjoyed this descriptive write, you are rapidly becoming one of my favorite reads on these boards, ten from me.
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    stellar

    01/14/2010

    thanks ;)

    BadBadBear commented on River

    12-15-2009

    Oh how the river's moans run free, tormenting the moon above .. the wife is highly desired when things are quietest. Ecstasy stimulated!
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    stellar

    01/14/2010

    Great insight,,,thank you..:)

    Baiser commented on River

    10-08-2009

    very beautiful. Your writing flows like the river you speak of, and I can visualize every detail.
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    stellar

    10/08/2009

    thank you so much

    anesh commented on River

    10-03-2009

    i love this poem it's deep and mysterious as well as it's also poetic
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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