Road to you

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    This poem dedicated to my beloved husband

    Road to you

                           
    Long gravel road
    Running through the grassland
    Mountains behind
    Rising to the sky
    Day is getting tiered
    Had enough to wrestle
    Green juicy grass
    Heavy from the rain

    Ark of the rainbow
    Bright and shiny colors
    Coming across
    High and endless space
    Gates to Paradise
    Visible for minutes
    Beautiful illusion
    And "amazing grace"

    Way to your heart
    Under ark of rainbow
    Sweet and vibrant dream
    Occupied my mind
    Wet gravel road
    Ruining through the grassland
    Several decades
    And many thousand miles

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    kdarcy commented on Road to you

    10-10-2010

    A calm peaceful place found me reading this. Made me thankful for your journey, as you so aptly described. Enjoy your fresh approach to things, simplicity is best k

    origionalmerlin commented on Road to you

    04-26-2009

    ahhhh the rainbow!!! line 5 4th word tired?? you did well in english most wonderful poet, i can walk in the images your words paint smile and laugh with glee feeling you and all you see through your words

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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