same is different

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    same is different

    what would you say
    if i say nothing
    if i lay here and died
    would you care

    would u even care if i lived
    how do i no if you speak the truth
    how do i know you don't lie
    you say you love me

    is that a lie
    is everything a lie
    is nothing the same
    what bout the past

    when we sat there just watching the clouds
    passing the time
    swimming
    running
    climbing trees

    is nothing the same anymore
    does it have to change
    do we have to loose ourselves to this world
    well?

    if things do change then whats if
    days turn to night
    and love becomes hate
    then do u hate me
    see i told you
    things change.

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    mattman90 commented on same is different

    10-01-2009

    Ah, i sympathize with your feelings, quite true and very well-written!

    fmrdancer commented on same is different

    10-01-2009

    WOW! Very profound for one so young.This is full of truisms. Keep writing .It was super

    SuperDan commented on same is different

    09-29-2009

    Not all things change. People just grow up. Get older. Begin to rethink what they want in life. At times growing up can be extremely painful. This is true but remember that what you go through now in life only makes you stronger

    CMarsh commented on same is different

    09-27-2009

    Great job Raven! Things are always changing on the outside, so if it's true love you seek look inside first then your heart will be filled with love and burst. Your young attractive and will have many more chances at love,but read the book first before judging it by the cover.

    cliftondurant commented on same is different

    09-27-2009

    sometime thing change but true love will last keep searching for that true love thanks for sharing

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    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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