Sanity

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Sanity

Escapes the mighty and the meek

A single bough that’s bent to break

And from the leaves the colors leak

As frost moves in and phantoms speak

 

Wisdoms sealed on yellowed pages

Like stories told through out the ages

Chipped like paint on window panes

But perhaps pretend some truth remains

 

Concealed and lost cliché aggressions

Poised on the eve of pale September

Steals away the dawn’s possessions

Unveiled mysteries we won’t remember

Gravity too soon defied

Roots that lightning ripped away

Forces that won’t be denied

Have the power then to stay

 

Playing wanton now at last

As colors fade and seep

The summer dissipates too fast

But wakes fallen idols from their sleep

 

And as those very colors die

Cold makes a promise not to stay

But beneath the shelter of the sky

Their glory is washed away

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kdarcy commented on Sanity

11-28-2010

A good job with the words here, made me go back for another read, its in my favs, love the title and abstract images, be well k

FadingFebruary commented on Sanity

09-20-2010

The title is "Sanity," and the reacurring image is of something being washed away, leaked, fleeting. Is it sanity that's fading? Great write. :]

SerenityWintirs

09/20/2010

You know, I am not really sure. Sometimes I write something that I really don't even completley understand myself. This poem is a perfect example. Thank you so much. Coming from you that really means alot.

Crush commented on Sanity

09-20-2010

10 ! that is all i have to say....you have a firm and intelligent grasp on this world we call poetry. thank you !

SerenityWintirs

09/20/2010

No, thank you. I am really happy that you liked it.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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