Sanity

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    Sanity
    What can I do what can I say. I know there is only one way out and it is to walk away.
    Two many nights of cryin, two many nights of lying. I just got to hang on for a few more days.
    I can't keep pretending anymore two many years of waiting to even the score.
    I cant pretend to love you when I can,t stand the sound of your voice, the touch of your body, even you breathing gave me no choice.
    But everyone said you must stay for the kids. They say what you feel you just have to learn with.
    But today is the day she turns 18 and I know Im not gonna live like this know more. Todays the day I walk out the door.You can have everything in this house because Im leaving with the only thing that is important to me............................
    MY SANITY

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    MOMofTWINS commented on Sanity

    10-01-2009

    Wow... You have no idea how much I relate to this piece... Very strong and also wonderfully crafted. Great job GG.
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    GucciGurl

    10/01/2009

    Thank you so much. This is based on facts and often it is real for so many women. Plz read my poem Free because sometimes this is what happens when we wait to long. Let your heart lead the way

    Chaos128 commented on Sanity

    10-01-2009

    In every life there comes that moment when tough decisions must be made. You captured such a moment, excellently, here, GG, even including the collateral damage that comes along with it – Sometimes you’ve just got to cut your losses. High marks!
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    GucciGurl

    10/01/2009

    Thank you. Yes times you just have to cut those lose but it makes it hard. But I made it and my life is good now. I never thought I could ever be myself again, but now I really no who I am. Plz read some of my others . I think u will enjoy them

    bandit1192 commented on Sanity

    05-07-2009

    When things go bad, sometimes it's best to just escape before you lose everything. I can relate top this. TS
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    FiloRozzell commented on Sanity

    04-24-2009

    You talk about me look at those beautiful of yours..I loved it and don't we need a way to gain or mantain our sanity..
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    lonewolf commented on Sanity

    04-21-2009

    strong emotions here. hope everything works out.
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