SATAN IS HERE

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Satan is on the prowl.  Watch out there now.

SATAN IS HERE

Satan came to me today
He said today, that I will stray
I said to him "there is no way"
It's my God I will betray

He said I'll tempt you day to day
I'll cause your mind to go astray
So on my knees to God I pray
to guide me through to find my way

He said, your life in disarray
and you pray to him and say
That you know he'll come someday
A word from him you'll be okay

When my salvation comes to play
It's my life I have to pay
So it's my life to God I lay
It is the Devil he will slay

So when the skies are gloom and grey
This whole world falls to decay
Just like the sun that has a ray
To the sky I'll fade away 

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wjpharg commented on SATAN IS HERE

07-28-2011

a good poem that really lets us know a war of the heart is goin on and satan really wants to trip and hurt us by any means necessary

aliciagall

10/06/2011

Devil is busy and it is time to recognize... Thanks for your comment...

JadedJezzabel commented on SATAN IS HERE

07-27-2010

I don't usually enjoy poems that rhyme the same word all the way through.....But you knocked this one out the park. Great job

aliciagall

01/12/2011

I use to think and only understand poems that rhyme but as I matured I have diversity in my work... The poems just has to SAY SOMETHING that the people can understand and relate too... Thanks for your comment...

genevievemust commented on SATAN IS HERE

07-26-2010

very good writing...this one reminds me a lot of my writing "Satans Song". God did say know the adversary and be wise concerning Satan's devices. In one more of my writings I wrote....We say like a fool that some things must be...but God sent His son to set me free.

aliciagall

01/12/2011

Satan's Song is RAW... But that is how the devil moves, VICIOUSLY!! He will do EVERYTHING to DESTROY and KILL your faith... I will read more... Thanks for your comment.

Tyme commented on SATAN IS HERE

07-26-2010

He's a tenatious one isn't he? I praise God for assurance of victory. Now, and life forever!

aliciagall

01/12/2011

OH YEAH God is definitely the VICTORIOUS ONE!!!

jickyjack commented on SATAN IS HERE

06-28-2010

I like the flow of this. The message is really a good one. We all need to be aware of temptation.

aliciagall

01/12/2011

For SURE, especially in this time when everything is going wrong in the world... It so easy to give in... Thanks for your comment..

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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Where's the Faith? 4
He Doesn't Say Goodnight? 9
I'm Still Here 1
No Stone Thrown 2
DON'T TURN AWAY 18
BE BLESSED 18
HAVE YOU NOT HEARD? 10
SATAN IS HERE 21
YOUNG BROTHER, YOU SLEEP? 12
TO MICHAEL, GONE BUT NEVER FORGOTTEN. 18
LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT 8
IT HAS TO BE GOD 14
ACCEPT SANITY 7
I CRY 7
I AM YOUR SISTER 6
I LOVE 14
IT JUST ME 4
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