Save Us

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  • Getting back in the groove of writing again :)

Save Us

The fine line between life and death,
Has been crossed.
The crowds still trudge on,
Can't you see...this isn't how it's meant to be?
Like a gift from Satan, this Utopia has fallen,
Grace has fallen a long way.
Shouldn't we all be shouting?
Save Us!
I feel it deeply, something out of control.
Save Us!
We've gone out of control, spiraling into a
Greedy Oblivion, when did it start?
When did this ugly beast bare it's fangs?
Save Us!
When did the great bow before the corrupted?
When did the flares get covered up
By a mischievous fog?
Save Us!
I dare you to tell me I'm wrong,
I dare you to tell me we haven't gone awry.
Save Us!
There isn't much left to this world now,
Save Us!
We've lost it all, and now I'm the one screaming,
Alone
SAVE US! 
~Kaitlin Platti~  

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StandingBear commented on Save Us

03-04-2010

Kaitlin , quite an observant work you've cleverly crafted.Great! SBear

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Platti’s Poems (134)

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Felo-de-se 1
Battle Lines 0
Humanity 1
Gods 3
Rain 1
Let Me 3
Train Wreck 3
Somehow 1
Close Friends 1
Washed My Hands Of This 2
Tattoo 3
Mash 1
The Weeping Willow 1
Hollow 1
When Tomorrow Comes 1
The Ribbon 2
Blank 2
Won 1
Puzzle 1
Angels 2
Save Us 1
Down 2
Stakes 1
Drawing Board 1
Every 1
Okay 1
Faint 1
Thread 1
Vindictive 1
Scream 1
Fly 1
Draining 1
If You Only Knew 1
Horizon 1
Lies 1
Fall 1
Promise 1
Far Away 1
Dreams 1
Hand Print 1
Me 2
Drugs 1
Devil's Playground 1
Standing 1
Heartless 1
Sorry 1
Heights 3
Plunge 2
Honesty 1
Fire 1
Middle 1
Cry 1
The Last Leaf 1
Upside Down 1
Fallen Dawn 1
Dear Mother 1
Ghost 1
Stargaze 1
Hidden 1
Toy Soldiers 1
Drowning 1
Never Say Never 1
Trust 1
Days 1
Lost 1
Precipice 1
Daze 1
Always-Never 1
Quiet 1
Woods 2
Intentions 1
Intentions 1
We All Fall Down 1
Let It Burn 1
Alone 1
Save Me 1
Generations 1
New Scars 1
Never Be 1
Through Glass 1
Disappointmen
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1
S.O.S 2
Last Goodbye 3
Never 1
Dear Beloved 2
Past 4
Mankind 1
Fated 1
The Pills 5
Run 1
Game 1
Stain 5
Separate Ways 3
Memorize 3
Let It Go -2
Awake -9
Despise 1
Our Place 1
Innocence 1
If It Helps You 1
Steady 1
It's Not Suicide 3
Hold Me Tight 1
Don’t Let It Fade 1
New Dawn 2
War 2
Sunrise 2
Path Of Least Resistance 1
Happy 2
This Time 2
No Regrets 1
You Have My Heart 2
Shattered 2
Reality 1
Nightmare 3
Salvation 1
Unknown Reason 3
Unknown Soldier 2
Tired and Troubled Soul 1
A Hopeless Emotion 1
Another Damn Day 1
Humanity 2
Journey 1
Down Pour 2
Your Answer 1
Haunt 1
Sisters 2
Forgotten Memory 1
Abandonment 3
Statue 1
Give Up 2
Angel Of Death 2
Immune 3
Understanding 5