Say " I Love You. "

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    Say " I Love You. "
    Sitting here alone now,
    in a quite secluded place,
    I look back deeply
    into my mind,
    as I picture your gentle
    face.

    My hand trembles slightly,
    as I reach for you
    to be near,
    then I catch myself
    remembering......

    you're no longer here

    Nobody will see
    the tears I now hide.
    Pray - we meet again,
    to walk side by side.

    So sitting here alone now
    in a quite secluded place,
    I look back deeply-
    into my mind,
    to picture your
    gentle face.

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    lightcourier commented on Say " I Love You. "

    05-04-2009

    Mournfully sad. Bittersweet to feel that root of longing. Thanks.
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    aggieprof commented on Say " I Love You. "

    04-18-2009

    Very touching. I love the first stanza.
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    bandit1192 commented on Say " I Love You. "

    03-25-2009

    Very sad. Could feel the longing and sorrow in every word. Wonderful poem. TS
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    WordSlinger commented on Say " I Love You. "

    03-24-2009

    Very touching, I miss my Grand Parents
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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