Sayin Goodbye

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  • Loss
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  • Death
    • Kaylimazza
    • I;m Falin in love but its fallin apart i need to find my way back to the start that led my back into your arms...

    Poem Commentary

    wow it was hard to wright becasue i cried the whole time but it was worth it

    Sayin Goodbye

    Sayin goodbye

    she says " i will 

                         always love you"

    I open

                   but

                                   the words fall out

                        like

                               they

                       mean 

           nothing

     

    so there i  watch

                                  her mouth bleed but she is still beautiful

              hey brown eyes....that any man would love

             her laugh

     

    i will miss these days

                  now i have to move on

     through the teasing

    and hazing

     

     

    and still pretend

     

     

                          she's there.

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

     

                      for me.

     

     

     

     

     

                    

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    Ninjaboy commented on Sayin Goodbye

    08-09-2010

    beautiful, just absolutely wonderful, it makes me not help but feel sorry for you and your loss, we have talked about this b4, but i will say again, there is (no matter what you think) peace in death.... and she is in a less painful place now, you will i promise see her again one day.. oh and it was good enough with enough emotion that not even knowing her it still makes me want to cry, which isnt an easy task..... im sorry for your loss, but remember, all wounds heal with time, some longer than others, but it will heal all the same, and then you can look to the fact that she is watching you now at this very moment.... thank you for this post kay... and we all miss you
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    HopeOhlarik commented on Sayin Goodbye

    03-02-2010

    good job. the hardest poems are often the best to write.they tell so much more than those easy poems could ever possibly do. i really liked how you let the words flow and move like they were falling, very neat idea. keep it up, and keep letting the emotion write the poem. i've gotten my best ones that way.
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    KingHostile commented on Sayin Goodbye

    02-23-2010

    I really like the way this is written, it helps to convey the feelings so well, I am not very creative with my structure like this.
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    Musicmynded1 commented on Sayin Goodbye

    02-22-2010

    I like it Kayli.............................................:/
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    stever commented on Sayin Goodbye

    02-21-2010

    very different..i love it the random lines is the coolest thing iv seen on here...by the way u look good for 120 years old...StEvEr
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    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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