Scars Beside

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  • The Pain

    Scars Beside

    Scars are left so deep into the skin.
    They are never truely gone.
    They are always dwindling at your soul. Dwindling at your mind.
    Presuming at your emotions.
    The scars beside my arms are cleaving toward my eyes.
    The scars beside my legs are ripping at my eyes.
    The scars beside my body are killing my heart.
    Scars of a broken heart,
    a knife,
    a loss,
    a pain,
    are all scars of the heart,
    soul,
    mind.

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    melankolik commented on Scars Beside

    09-15-2009

    i love this poem...diction is perfect, the tone haunting..its really beautiful

    writingislove

    09/15/2009

    Thank you very much for all of your support!

    Hampton commented on Scars Beside

    09-01-2009

    Well done. Emotionally charged and written with great feeling

    writingislove

    09/01/2009

    Thank you!

    dahlusion commented on Scars Beside

    07-08-2009

    Intensely beautiful, heart felt, and tragic in a masterful way. The depth of your words cling to my soul.

    writingislove

    07/08/2009

    Thank you very much.

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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