Secret Language

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Secret Language

there's a secret smile, in the corner
of my mouth, these days
when I think of you
it's true

you know
you make me feel
good enough to be myself
I have no secrets from you, only

unexplored
realms, awaiting
discovery

there's a secret language, that
springs from my heart
that only you
hear

words.
containing
stories, explaining
all there is of me that's real

and you
feel me, in your dark
unyielding, I wield the light
that whispers, soothe, in your heart

that I hear your secret language
I am fluent in your suffering
murmer softly, stroking
I know you

and I,
love you so
very much simply because
there's a secret smile, in the corner of
my mouth these days
when I think of you
it's true, I'm

your friend
that's what I am...

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mdpoetgirl commented on Secret Language

02-07-2011

love your style... this poem flows very well... enjoyed reading it ;-)

tenderpoison

02/07/2011

thank you very much :)

Rhymer commented on Secret Language

01-31-2011

How can one find the words to properly critique this piece. Excellent work 10 from me.

tenderpoison

01/31/2011

thank you very muchly :)

Dano commented on Secret Language

01-31-2011

very strong sentiment and fantastic display of emotion... nothing more to say because this peice speaks for itself

tenderpoison

01/31/2011

thanks Dano :)

bandit1192 commented on Secret Language

01-30-2011

Loved this... I've read it three times and finish each with a wistful smile. (sigh) Great write! TS

gogant commented on Secret Language

01-29-2011

Friends and lovers......hey, what could be better..........we all have that inkling, for a lover, deep down inside our hearts, and we know the special one knows it secretly too.............A truly wonderful verse, dear TP..............................................g

tenderpoison

01/30/2011

Thanks G :) I like the way you read this...is that like a super secret language within a secret language? lol.... the secret language is poetry, and how we here share our hearts with each other through our writing :)

The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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