Self Destruction

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    Self Destruction

    My self destruction has begun
    And you are the only one
    Who can quiet my sobs, dry my tears,
    Hold me tight, overcome my fears.

    Your absence is driving me insane,
    I feel ignored, I feel the pain.
    The countdown started right on cue,
    The victory goes to you.

    Time creeps on and the numbers fly,
    Without your breath, I will surely die.
    I am drowsy, my eyes now shut.
    Self destruction the answer to my rut.

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    lonewolf commented on Self Destruction

    12-12-2009

    i agree with wordslinger, this is a great little poem. it could have been longer, other than that, well done

    WordSlinger commented on Self Destruction

    03-20-2009

    this poem was rated a 5, no way i gave it an 8, you were hit by a fly by poet, I like this poem

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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