seraph seduction

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This was a recent dream experience. Some would say it was just a fantasy for me. I truly felt that I experienced heavenly sex with an angel. By the way, the angel was neither a male nor a female, but encompassed both genders. I have been away for a while, so busy with the coming of Radiant Spring! Thanks for reading on my page-Enjoy!

seraph seduction


hoisted high on heaven’s vault

my soul was drawn, beyond exalt

platinum velvet skin, liquid light

love energy in otherworldly flight

 

embraced was I, with powerful wings

instant knowledge imparted, on myriads of things

eons of mysteries telepathically spoken

memories, promises, protected, unbroken

 

all blinding darkness fell away

in pure radiance, ecstasy was displayed

harmonious balance, all beauty in accord

my trust in natural unity, restored

 

complete, absolute, sheer, translucent

genuine, innocent, glorious, unobtrusive

and gently was I returned to earth

upon my pillow, not a hair, save my soul, was stirred

 

to awaken at dawn, seeming from a dream

changed forever by a seraph’s fantasy

 

-M. Jacobs

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Maxsbabyforever commented on seraph seduction

12-01-2010

Oh my gosh.... amazing. you did such a good job! Add me! i have the same kind of poetry, Dark, Fantasy and chilling, i just haven't posted it yet.

danmartyjake1

12/02/2010

Glad you liked it. Thanks for tuning in and responding to it. Many thanks!! ;-)

alreedus commented on seraph seduction

12-01-2010

If I could be such a seraph, I would crawl unknowlingly about you, sucking splendor from pores and crevices that emanate light, colors, the smell of the poppy and try with all my might to refrain from shouting delight.

danmartyjake1

12/02/2010

Thanks for reading the poem, and your interesting commentary. Smiles!

MarionYost commented on seraph seduction

11-21-2010

great flow, good imagery. interesting poem . All the best -Marion-

danmartyjake1

11/22/2010

Thanks for your support. Glad you enjoyed it. Great to hear from you. ;-)

Marsink commented on seraph seduction

09-20-2010

Read it again and enjoyed as much or more so than the first! To capture a dream framed in fine word-art is a desireable skill, and the visons from paradisical phrases set one's mind at heavens gate! Applause building!

danmartyjake1

09/20/2010

A Joyous Thank You to You for coming back and your opinion matters to me. Many thanks. ;-)

Chaos128 commented on seraph seduction

08-02-2010

Ha ha when you've seen the best, you won't settle for less! A vivid description of a transcendent vision.

danmartyjake1

09/13/2010

It seems that for me, this is the ultimate encounter! I appreciate your thoughts.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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