serenity

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serenity

The daylight comes from no tomorrow,
full of pain and also sorrow.

The summers edge that lays in wait,
like a destiny in the hands of fate.

The weary man and lonely traveler,
watch as life passes hour by hour.

No one knows and no one cares,
in this world no one dares.

They see the light of the passing moon,
for it is their time to go so soon.

When the angel comes in complete surprise,
so comes a new day when the sun will rise.

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Crush commented on serenity

08-21-2016

i liked this poem a lot. very visual and full of emotion. nice write.

WordSlinger commented on serenity

02-28-2010

Amen on this one, a complete surprise for sure, loved it, thank you, WS

litldeer commented on serenity

08-03-2009

Another great piece. You took me into your world as I read this. Your rhyming is perfect. Keep it going. Another ten from me.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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