Showers Change Minds

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Showers Change Minds

Showers truly change mind-settings.

I think the electricity of the radio must charge the water or something.

Reaching my brain waves. Following my leg veins up my spine to the core of me.

Because I honestly don't know what happens next...

The warm water flows over my shoulders, down my neck...

One drop lands on my mouth.

And my mind is instantly simplified by static.

Two options for you, brain cells.

Sing to the radio or worry about something unimportant.

And I sing for you. And I live in the moment like you taught me to

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angelchaser commented on Showers Change Minds

06-11-2010

Very good poem. I've been thinking about what to say about it, since it mentions you in the shower, I have to be careful of what I say lol. let's just say that I bet a bunch of boys are gonna like the imagery of this one^^.

AlysonAlive

06/11/2010

Lol xD I did figure. But its great inner-thinking. I must admit, in the shower, I'm quite self-concious and do view myself but then again, the water makes me feel a bit pretty too. :D

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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