Showstoppers

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  • christianprep
  • done with my study it was hard now my poem is published its called Prayer Study and Poem

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I don't know I just wanted to write something.. i wanted it to be a dark poem... its called showstopper because its involved at parties and shows it says it in the poem hope you like

Showstoppers

Twisted in the night

in this big world of ,

good and bad..

were all things fall silent

from a show that will never be forgotten

it was that night, that the beast in you came out

you just keep-ed taking life’s

with no mercy in your eye's

since then there was no parties

because your a showstopper

but come day's you turn into your old good you

like you know not of what you did

but then a hero comes to a night's show

that stops your killing sprees

an takes your life

but then the hero becomes the bad

and the party ends for ever more

day or night

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ImStillHere commented on Showstoppers

12-01-2010

this is a dark poem indeed (lol i almost put "indead") :) i enjoyed it. ~Audrey

christianprep

12/01/2010

I tried..lol thanks

christianprep

12/08/2010

thanks... ill read a poem latter

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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christianprep’s Poems (44)

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Title Comments
Pa 0
March In Victory 1
Dateless 1
Prayer Study and Poem 1
A letter To God 0
Goal Against The World 0
Book Revelations and revelation 1
Mother Here's My heart 0
No Friend 1
Beast 2
Silent Tears 2
Rippled Heart 3
My Book Immortal 1
Danger Great Revelations 2
Abba 3
Saved 1
Mistakes 0
Showstoppers 1
Nightmare 4
I prayed to God 0
Eke Towed Prince 1
Soulmate 2
Asylum 8
Prosper A Fate 2
Hellfire 1
Dangerous 2
Broken Family 1
Depression in her heart 2
Everything You Reap You Sow 2
Tell me Your Beutiful 1
Cauious and Open 1
I am proud to call you savor 3
Simple flames 2
christmas children 2
MOSES 4
Not My Time 1
Just Time 3
Dawning 1
I am God 2
weeping tears 1
Dance with me 1
DARKNESS 1
hail third series 0
heaven series two 5