Silent Tears

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  • christianprep
  • done with my study it was hard now my poem is published its called Prayer Study and Poem

Poem Commentary

Again emotionally written, because you think you understand it... My emotions a jumbled because of reasons I don't want people to know whats really going on but I express some through this but theirs always more too it then you think... I am relieved a little now that i wrote this... It helps... I thank the lord for that

Silent Tears

Silent tears,

You can't see me cry..

for its all inside..

 

Silent tears,

i cry, for only i know why..

with my depressing thoughts I break...

 

Silent Tears,

Of rage, loneliness all because..

They all don't see me for who I really am

 

Silent Tears,

I cry, because I am treated differently,

Like a little kid..

 

Silent Tears,

I cry, because I want to be free..

Too move on my own to prove my dreams..

 

Silent Tears,

I cry, because I am grown...

And its time to get my own life

 

Silent Tears,

I cry, because I am not on my own yet.

and its all because I am not ready for reasons

 

Silent Tears,

You can't see me cry...

for its all inside

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Worthless commented on Silent Tears

07-26-2011

Feeling the same... Silent tears no one knows, does no good to show, waiting for love and hope, silent tears wishing a man would hold me near...

LoveDeeply commented on Silent Tears

01-22-2011

Very emotional! I love it Keep up the good work! It made me want to ask if you were okay.

christianprep

01/22/2011

lol thanks I am good just a little depressed because of things but its all good because my poems and my sisters are around

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

christianprep’s Poems (44)

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March In Victory 1
Dateless 1
Prayer Study and Poem 1
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Goal Against The World 0
Book Revelations and revelation 1
Mother Here's My heart 0
No Friend 1
Beast 2
Silent Tears 2
Rippled Heart 3
My Book Immortal 1
Danger Great Revelations 2
Abba 3
Saved 1
Mistakes 0
Showstoppers 1
Nightmare 4
I prayed to God 0
Eke Towed Prince 1
Soulmate 2
Asylum 8
Prosper A Fate 2
Hellfire 1
Dangerous 2
Broken Family 1
Depression in her heart 2
Everything You Reap You Sow 2
Tell me Your Beutiful 1
Cauious and Open 1
I am proud to call you savor 3
Simple flames 2
christmas children 2
MOSES 4
Not My Time 1
Just Time 3
Dawning 1
I am God 2
weeping tears 1
Dance with me 1
DARKNESS 1
hail third series 0
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